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Reading the Pictures

princeandthedressmakerScott McCloud, a well respected expert about Comics and Graphic Novels, declares, “Pictures ARE text” and “Pictures ARE meaning” in an interview (17:45) and that they are not just illustrations in a novel of words.  I already cited these words in a comment about Shannon Hale’s Real Friends in January and urged Heavy Medal readers to expand the meaning of “text” — or for Newbery manual to be updated so that images in a graphic novel would not be considered separately from the words.

As I “read” both the words and the pictures of two outstanding middle grade graphic novels, I attempted to evaluate the pictures and the panel sequences at the same time as I considered the dialogue, descriptors, plot progression, and presentation of themes and to not privilege one over the other.

Since both Be Prepared by Vera Brosgol and The Prince and the Dressmaker by Jen Wang were created by single author/artist, like Roller Girl and El Deafo, previous Newbery honored titles, we do not have the conundrum of attempting to figure out whether the author or the artist is responsible for certain imagery and effective choices.

bepreparedBe Prepared is a raw, sometimes heart-wrenching, but eventually triumphant memoir of a summer camp full of middle grade perils: mean girls, obnoxious boys, and feeling perpetually an outsider.  There are moments of hilarity, but the tone leans darker and unpleasant – as is the apt choice of a sickly green on all the pages.  The gradual realization of her situation and growth from dependent on others for validation to self-reliant and more confident would resonate with many young readers.

These panels below showcase Brosgol’s dexterity in capturing the mood of each scene and and her ability to convey movements and exaggerated humor.


I especially appreciate these two small panels toward the end: readers can see not only that Vera appears more assured and has a brain for a mastermind (see those eye brows, narrowed eyes, and the steepled hands), her two friends/allies are excited about her “better idea.”  Note how the friends that only appear as elbow and hair but lean in further to Vera, with secretly satisfying smiles. The book is full of such detailed moments.  bepreapred2

Jen Wang created both an original tale and one that echoes certain artistic tropes in The Prince and the Dressmaker.  One of the final scenes definitely remind me of the musical (stage & movie) Bird Cage (La Cage aux Folles) – effective and fitting — and, I imagine, unfamiliar to the target readers.

The tale is light and warm, with moments of revelation and tension.  The relationship between Prince Sebastian and Dressmaker/Designer Frances from employer/employee to close friends to potential lovers progresses naturally, with serious bumps and dips along the way, is a delight to follow.  Jen Wang conveys the narrative in fluid combination of words, pictures, and panel designs, interpreting the theme of self-expression, friendship, and familiar support effectively.  Take just a couple of pages for example:

Here is a masterful set of choices of perspectives and panel resizing and nesting for dramatic effects: half of the really tall door opening without revealing who’s entering the room, the long shot of Sebastian as he slams the door, the closeup of his face first in shock and then the nested panel showing his emotional reaction just with the dropped jaw and slightly crooked mouth, paired with the words, “I need to go out in that right now.”


This is an emotionally effective, wordless page, capturing their intense first realization of the changing tenor in their relationship — is it too cliché? or simply just right?  Could it be both?


What other graphic novel offerings this year you’d like to see us discuss (Hey, Kiddo by Jarrett J. Krosoczka is one of the five finalists for National Book Awards so we will most likely include it in a future post.)

Roxanne Hsu Feldman About Roxanne Hsu Feldman

Roxanne Hsu Feldman is the Middle School (4th to 8th grade) Librarian at the Dalton School in New York City. She served on the 2002 and 2013 Newbery Committees. Roxanne was also a member of 2008-2009 Notable Books for Children, 2015 Best Fiction for Young Adults, and the 2017 Odyssey Award Committees. In 2016 Roxanne was one of the three judges for the Boston Globe-Horn Book Awards. You can reach her at at


  1. I absolutely loved THE PRINCE AND THE DRESSMAKER. The story flowed so well and the graphic novel format conveyed so much more than if it had been written as a standard chapter book. I know that it is a title that as soon as I finish I was taking it to other library staff members telling them that they needed to add it to their to read stack right now!

    Although it is not necessarily a graphic novel I am curious of how THE FAITHFUL SPY will fit into the Newbery or even maybe Printz hunt. I feel that unfortunately the images in it may been seen as secondary even though they to me felt like an important part of the book.

    I will hopefully get my copy of HEY KIDDO soon!

  2. Steven Engelfried Steven Engelfried says:

    A couple others I’d put in the conversation:

    PETER AND ERNESTO is a very appealing graphic novel that’s accessible to pretty young readers. Not a lot of words, though, so I will have to stretch to see it through the Newbery lens, which I have to do with most every graphic novel. When I reread it I feel like I should have “Pictures ARE text and pictures ARE meaning” on a 3 x 5 card and repeat the words aloud to myself frequently.

    CARDBOARD KINGDOM is pretty amazing too. It’s actually a good reinforcement for that refrain about pictures, because while many different writers contributed separate chapters, the illustrations are all by Chad Sell, and they hold the individual pieces together, and maybe even make the whole greater than its parts.

  3. Hi. I missed the recommendations for Newbery contenders. Can I email you? – The Unforgettable Guinevere St. Clair is a must-read consideration. Sorry, this is not a graphic novel and does not go here but I see that comments for contenders are closed… thank you!

  4. Leonard Kim says:

    Reading this analysis, I am not yet where Roxanne is as far as considering visual elements for a Newbery. Last year in the Real Friends discussion, I tried to sell a sort of “implied screenplay” approach to graphic novels, making an analogy to movies and the Oscars. I think this does allow one to look at Criteria of plot and character that may be conveyed wordlessly. Where I am still falling short are things that, by analogy to movies, might fall under cinematography, directing, editing, or even acting. And my inclination is to exclude these, even when done by the same person. Orson Welles produced, directed, starred in, and wrote Citizen Kane, which was nominated for 9 Oscars. Even though Welles served many functions, each separate award category still had to tease out elements specific to it, and in the end Citizen Kane won only the “Newbery” (i.e. best screenplay).

    That said PETER & ERNESTO and CARDBOARD KINGDOM are still tops for me as far as Newbery goes. I was convinced by Jonathan Hunt’s Newbery argument for Elephant and Piggie, and PETER & ERNESTO is at heart 120 pages of Elephant and Piggie. Even so, I wouldn’t use Annable’s showstopping depiction of the Northern Lights (86) in a Newbery argument.

    • As usual, Leonard, I want to be inside your brain for a day. Your arguments concerning “separate categories” (Academy Awards approach) is quite fascinating. However, I think that comparing awards for movies and awards for books is like comparing a donkey to a horse: they’re both similar creatures and achieve similar tasks, but you wouldn’t mistake one for the other. If you did, we’d have donkey polo matches and donkey dressage. Or horse basketball.

      Having said that, I wasn’t as into ERNESTO as you were. I thought it was sweet and more primed for the Geisel (damn that page limit rule!). BE PREPARED was only so-so to me. DRESSMAKER I loved, but it didn’t really achieve a whole lot of distinction in words. Images, yes. Words, no. I still haven’t read CARDBOARD KINGDOM.

      I’m still hoping that ALA will come up with a graphic novel award. It’s about time!

      • I would love to see excellent graphic novels awarded but I would also hate for it to be like the Oscar for cartoons where even excellent movies like Coco can’t get a nomination in the “regular” category. I’d love for them to be integrated and not sidelined.

      • It’d be interesting if instead of a graphic novel award, we had a “whole package” book award. Our two big awards are the Newbery, for text, and the Caldecott, for art. There are more and more books being published where there is an interaction of text and art (as in graphic novels) or the illustrations or text are not superb in themselves, but the whole is greater than the parts. Or sometimes I think “wow, the design of this book has really elevated it into something more” but that’s not necessarily something that’s a Newbery consideration. There’s the National Book Award or the BGHB awards, by they don’t have consistent criteria from year to year. I know it’d be difficult to write criteria that would encompass wordless picture books, middle grade novels with no illustrations at all, nonfiction, graphic novels, early readers, etc.

      • Eric Carpenter says:

        This summer ALA approved the creation of the Graphic Novels and Comics Round Table (it was previously an interest group). From my understanding the Round Table’s long term plans included exploring the possibility of the creation of a notable comics list and/or an annual award. I would encourage ALA members interested in these possibilities to join the Graphic Novels and Comics round table now or when you renew your membership.

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