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Review of the Day: Every Soul a Star by Wendy Mass

Every Soul a Star
By Wendy Mass
Little, Brown and Company
ISBN: 978-0-316-03313-8
Ages 8-14
On shelves now

Natural phenomena lend themselves to children’s literature. Picture books, for example, are filled with fireflies, rainbows, and shooting stars. Then the child readers get a little older and the phenomena get more complex. The death of the atom in Smiles to Go or the frozen lake of melted radioactive sand in The Green Glass Sea (okay, so maybe that one’s not so natural). And I’m sure, I am sure, that a novel has been written with an eclipse at its climax. Odds are that such a book would be a fantasy novel. I’ve never heard of one, but it makes perfect sense for people to be racing against an eclipse so as to close the portal on another dimension, etc. etc. etc. Boring! You know what’s exciting? Realistic eclipse fiction like Every Soul a Star. Once again author Wendy Mass takes a crack at science and the idea of questioning a world that you may have taken for granted until now. Entirely engaging and oddly thrilling, this is one contemporary tween novel that’s just begging for the right booktalk.

The narrative is split between three kids as different as different can be. Two of them, however, have the exact same problem and that has to do with Moon Shadow Campground. For most of her natural born life Ally has lived on the campground far away from the rest of society, just the way she likes it. Now she’s found out that her parents have sold the place to someone else and soon she’ll have to move. That someone is Bree’s family and as much as Ally doesn’t want to leave, so too does Bree not want to stay. She’s the queen bee of popularity at her school and the notion of spending a couple years surrounded by just rocks and natural beauty is horrifying, to say the least. In the midst of this problem arrives Jack, a self-conscious artistic type who has come for the total eclipse of the sun along with thousands of other tourists. Topping it all off is an event that changes how they see themselves when all the lights go out. Backmatter consists of an Author’s Note and websites and books for further reading about the night sky.

I was curious to see that though four kids are hanging out in this book, only three were allowed a voice. Poor Ryan. He’s a character that has been friends with Ally for years, but is suddenly far more interested in a girl as fashion conscious as Bree. One gets the vague sense that had he proved to be a more interesting person, maybe he could have earned himself a narrative. As it stands, he’s just your normal everyday teenaged doofus. A nice guy, sure, but no one you’d feel the need to enter the head of. Ally talks to stars as if they were her friends, so that makes her interesting right there. Jack hasn’t so much as a whisper of self-respect at the start, and that’s a starting point. But it’s Bree that turns out to be the surprise. I know that some girls are completely obsessed by Gossip Girl and Clique and those other books with their amusingly vapid heroines. Well if you ever see one of these readers, try convincing them that Bree is the same kind of creature. Her goal in life is to be discovered and to become a model, so to watch an otherwise missing brain slowly morph into a decent human being over the course of 322 pages . . . now that’s a natural phenomena for you!

Mass does two important things with this novel. First off, she creates two entirely convincing opposite perspectives. Bree and Ally are both sympathetic, but for vastly different reasons. And as much as you’d like to continue to dislike Bree for most the book, she’s a person who is easy to understand. I’m not entirely convinced that her conversion at the end of the book is anything but a pretty blatant example of deus ex machina (or, in this case, deus ex telescope) but I’m willing to let it go. The second difficult thing Mass does is to (I hate this phrase but I can’t think of a better one) make science interesting. Because she really does. The part of the human brain that contains a capacity for a natural sense of wonder would have to be dead if the person finishing this book wasn’t filled with a wholehearted desire to see a total eclipse of the sun. I’ve never wanted to see one before but after reading the description in this book I’d hop the next train if you told me one was in the general vicinity.

I always enjoy a kid’s book that works against my natural expectations of what’s going to happen next. I mean, look at this equation: Popular girl meets unpopular girl at campground. There are only a couple of different ways you can go with a storyline like that, so Mass gets points for taking the road less traveled. For one thing, the kids in this book get along. I sort of expected this to be a novel where people fought, bickered, and came to learn about themselves through conflict. But this is a little different. The kids have essentially been tossed out onto their own by the adults in their lives, or have left those adults voluntarily for the first time. Adrift they end up clinging to people in similar situations. And Mass toys with her canny readers, TOYS I say! You simply cannot have a boy reading the Ray Bradbury story All Summer in a Day (it’s never named but you know that’s what it is) in the first act without implying that something similar is going to happen to him in the third. I won’t give anything away, but it’s nerve wracking to say the last.

Ally is one of the few homeschooled heroines I’ve found in middle grade fiction lately. That’s neat. It’s nice to have a detail like that interwoven with a tale about the death of the sun and that equally awesome event, our entrance into teenagerhood. And I really do think that you could sell this book equally well to the kid who loves books about science and realism as to the kid who’ll only touch titles that contain fashion forward females. I could be wrong, but I think it’s worth trying. Give it a look yourself. It’s a pretty neat juggling act.

On shelves now.

Good Quote: “First of all,” I reply, “this was no little spider.  It had a presence.  It had a soul.  A mean soul, intent on eating me.”

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  • Wendy Mass actually keeps a blog of her own.
  • Editor Alvina Ling talks about the book and quotes two professional reviews of it.
About Elizabeth Bird

Elizabeth Bird is currently the Collection Development Manager of the Evanston Public Library system and a former Materials Specialist for New York Public Library. She has served on Newbery, written for Horn Book, and has done other lovely little things that she'd love to tell you about but that she's sure you'd find more interesting to hear of in person. Her opinions are her own and do not reflect those of EPL, SLJ, or any of the other acronyms you might be able to name. Follow her on Twitter: @fuseeight.


  1. I even love the title of this book, so to read that it’s about science and eclipses is exciting. And a homeschooled kid! Wow!

  2. Brenda Ferber says

    This book sounds great. Will definitely read it. And I loved what you said about Ryan, “A nice guy, sure, but no one you’d feel the need to enter the head of.” That perspective is the perfect way to think of character and helpful for me in terms of my work-in-progress. Thanks!

  3. And wow that’s a nice cover.

  4. Regarding your first paragraph, just a reminder, the plural is “phenomena,” or “phenomenons,”not “phenomenon.” “Phenomenon” is always singular.

  5. I went through every possible spelling of that and each time my Word spellcheck told me it was wrong. Eventually I just threw up my hands in protest. Good to know what the true spelling is.

  6. Little Willow says

    I really liked this book, too. I liked the three perspectives – though I agree that it would have been neat to see/hear more from Ryan – and applaud her for making each person so distinct.

  7. I thoroughly enjoyed this book. Thanks for prompting me to pull it off my pile.

  8. oh, i LOVED THIS BOOK!! my favorite book! I loved how distinct each point of view was. Ally was my personal favorite character! If you read the review and don’t plan on reading it, then you’re making a mistake!!

  9. Ultimate #1 Flareon Fan says

    I read this book this book at school and [i]loved[/i] it! =D I liked how each chapter was pertrayed in the three main characters’ view, and how you got to see what Ally, Bree, and Jack each thought about the situations. Definent thumbs up.

  10. I am in the middle of this book and so far I love it! Wendy Mass is one of my favorite authors!

  11. Victoria says

    i this tht this is a very good book so far but some parts can be hard to under stand whn they 1st start talking about the science stuff

  12. i really loved this book up until page 218 when it stopped and went back to page 187-218 then after it repeated 218, it went to page 251. anyone else have this problem?

  13. okay so i got a replacement and i finished the book that day, it was amazing. but i wanna read more about them

  14. This book is the best ever! I have read it about eight times. I am doing mt book project on it the only thing I don’t know is when the book takes place someone please tell me when it does.