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Review of the Day: Ballet for Martha by Jan Greenberg and Sandra Jordan

Ballet for Martha: Making Appalachian Spring
By Jan Greenberg and Sandra Jordan
Illustrated by Brian Floca
Flash Point (an imprint of Roaring Brook Press)
ISBN: 978-1-59643-338-0
Ages 5-10
On shelves August 3, 2010

Collaboration. True life stories of collaboration told in a picture book format. It’s a challenge that I give myself: Name such stories off the top of your head. If you’re a children’s librarian then surely you can think of one or two, yes? So I start to think about it. Let’s see . . . well, there was Amelia and Eleanor Go for a Ride, but that was more a story about two strangers meeting nicely than a tale of collaboration (the same could be said for When Harriet Met Sojourner). It shouldn’t be that hard to think of such stories though, right? I mean, we’re constantly telling our kids that cooperation is an essential skill. We teach them to share. We (hopefully) give them the chance to learn about the essential give and take that exists when two or more people try to create something new together. Yet my mind is a perfect blank until I look over and see my copy of Ballet for Martha perched on the arm of my chair. The tale of how a dancer, a composer, and an artist/set designer is a true story that shows how professional adults can work together, regardless of differences in background, ethnicity, or experience.

“Sometimes art is made by one artist, working alone, but sometimes it is the result of artists working together – collaborating – to forge something new.” New was not an unfamiliar word to dancer Martha Graham. She spent a great deal of her life exploring new types of dance in the mid-20th century. And when she wanted to make a dance about American living, she turned to composer Aaron Copland. With much revision to her vision, Copland wrote for Martha music based on the old Shaker hymn “Simple Gifts”. After that, Isamu Noguchi was hired to create the spare sets for the production. The show was called “Appalachian Spring” and it has since become an American classic. The kind that can be recreated and reenacted forever, all because three different people got together to make a ballet that displayed their best works. A “Curtain Call” afterword says more about the lives of each of the three artists and a Notes and Sources section includes a Bibliography, Web Sites, and additional Notes.

Now as I see it, it would make very little sense to write a book about the creation of “Appalachian Spring” if you used an overabundance of flowery language. As such, I can’t help but think that Greenberg and Jordan made a conscious decision at some point in the game to write the book with plain, simple text. The words are full of description but don’t overwhelm Floca’s illustrations. Sentences like “The bridegroom twirls with his bride. Then she prances in quick small steps” do an excellent job at conveying precisely what this ballet would feel like to watch. Even before you get to the pictures, the authors have synthesized the show’s process into a scant 48 pages. And while the bulk of the focus rests on Martha, the writers continually pull the focus back to the music, the set, the set, the music. Even if Copland and Noguchi aren’t prancing around the stage with Martha, they’re present in even piece of the dance. They are as much a part of this show as she is. This book works because it doesn’t shove them off to the side or conveniently forget about them. After all, all shows are collaborations. And as the very last sentence reads, in cases where new productions of “Appalachian Spring” are mounted, “. . . the collaboration will be created anew.”

At first I felt that the book was near bereft of conflict. This is Martha Graham we’re talking about. She knew what she wanted, she got it, and she was not a pushover. One has to assume that there were moments of tension within this collaboration. Rereading Ballet for Martha, though, I located those moments. There was the dancers’ initial discomfort with Noguchi’s set, for example. Or the fact that sometimes when Martha couldn’t get a dance right, “She has a tantrum. She screams. She yells. She throws a shoe. The dancers wait. Martha figures it out.” When writing her plan for the ballet to Aaron he had her rewrite her ideas until they made sense. The conflict is there, but it’s useful conflict. The kind that includes the kind of give-and-take you need to work on a single vision with someone else.

When it comes to establishing a time or era set in the past, Mad Men‘s got nuthin’ on Brian Floca, and you can quote me on that. The man’s range is extraordinary. One minute it’s cute little mice in books by Avi, the next he’s delving into a light fantasy, and then the next thing you know he’s taking our men to the moon. Ballet for Martha reigns Floca in a bit, after the massive success of Moonshot though the two books have more similarities than differences. For example, Floca allows himself the occasional sweeping vista, as when we see the fictional farmer and bride staring out over a vast, near empty prairie. But where Moonshot was all about the mechanics and grandiose heart-stopping breadth of space itself, Ballet for Martha zeroes in on the individual. That’s a funny thing to say, considering that the book is collaboration-based, but it’s true. Floca shows us the human body in motion. From Graham’s distinctive contraction and release style to the ways in which a person moves in a single space. He’s also very good at showing collaborative dancing, where a person is meant to share space and movement with another. In essence, share the spotlight. Which, to a large degree, is the very point of the book itself.

Beyond the watercolors, I was interested in the ways in which Floca uses handwriting to make a point. This happens only three or four times in the book, but it was enough to catch my eye. The most riveting picture, possibly in the whole book, is the one Floca created for Graham’s 1929 piece “Heretic”. There we see a wall of women in black, a single woman in white on her knees before them, and the words “Heretic, 1929” scrawled in white in a lower right hand corner. This imposing use of handwriting stands in contrast to previous page where the black on white writing explains the contraction and release movements so aligned with Graham’s work. The only other real time handwriting is invoked comes when Floca illustrates the orchestra. Though the text explains who is present, Floca’s handwriting touches on each member’s instrument. You might not notice that there is handwriting in the book on a first or second read, but on the third or fourth it catches your eye. Maybe that’s why Floca chooses to use it. It’s a way of drawing your attention to something in a firm but subtle way. Something to ponder, anyway.

The book would pair very well with individual biographies of each of the three collaborators, like Noguchi’s bio, The East West House: Noguchi’s Childhood in Japan by Christy Hale, or Russell Freedman’s, Martha Graham: A Dancer’s Life, or Mike Venezia’s Aaron Copland (there’s not a lot on Copland out there for kids). Alas, the Bibliography at the back of this book contains a list of titles more appropriate for adults than kids, so you won’t find any of these books mentioned there. Still and all, I suspect that there’s enough information in this book to get some people interested in seeking out the original music (or video of the performance on YouTube for that matter).

Just as the original ballet was a collaboration between three people, so too is this book. Two authors plus one illustrator equals a way of telling a story that is too often ignored. Practical applications for collaborating with others based on real world events in a picture book form? Rare. Books that read and look this good together? Rarer still. A book that works as both a practical object and a beautiful text. Sometimes we just need stories that show us how to make things.

On shelves August 3rd.

Source: F&G sent from publisher for review.

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Interviews: Without a doubt, you must read this interview with Brian Floca conducted by SLJ.  If for no other reason than the fact that the man can execute a sweet pas de chat, when called upon to do so.


  • Those of you in St. Louis might be interested in this upcoming performance with the St. Louis Symphony, utilizing Floca’s art. “In conjunction with American Arts Experience-St. Louis, a citywide festival celebrating American art and artists, October 1-17, 2010, the SLSO features a weekend of American masterworks. . . . The performance of the beloved Appalachian Spring will include projected illustrations by Brian Floca, from a new book about the legendary choreographer and dancer Martha Graham, Ballet for Martha: Making Appalachian Spring, by Jan Greenberg and Sandra Jordan (October 1 & 3, 2010).”


Curious about what the dance looked like?  No need!  It’s entirely on YouTube.  Here’s the beginning:

About Elizabeth Bird

Elizabeth Bird is currently the Collection Development Manager of the Evanston Public Library system and a former Materials Specialist for New York Public Library. She has served on Newbery, written for Horn Book, and has done other lovely little things that she'd love to tell you about but that she's sure you'd find more interesting to hear of in person. Her opinions are her own and do not reflect those of EPL, SLJ, or any of the other acronyms you might be able to name. Follow her on Twitter: @fuseeight.


  1. I love this book. It is ever so wonderful. Maybe it will draw the attention of the Caldecott Committee.

    Might I also humbly point out that my book, BALLET OF THE ELEPHANTS, illustrated by Robert Andrew Parker and also published by Roaring Brook Press, is about just such an artistic and inventive collaboration? And it included elephants! Fifty of them, to be precise.

    Stravinsky, Balanchine, John Ringling North, Vera Zorina, Modoc, elephant trainers, set designers, etc. Kirkus and Horn Book Best of the Year, NYTimes Editor’s Choice, Bluebonnet list, JLG, etc.?


    • Elizabeth Bird says

      Ah ha! Good point that, Leda. Thanks! I’d forgotten about the elephants. That book was also on NYPL’s 100 Books for Reading and Sharing list that year too.

  2. I would like for there to be a book about the Eames! They were very collaborative and I am doing a cool craft project with kids today based on their house of cards toy design (we are making a giant set with the packaging saved from our book shipments!) and was dissapointed to find very little in my library system just about them, let alone written for children. Can someone make this happen?

  3. I loved Leda’s BALLET OF THE ELEPHANTS and I bet this old student at Balanchine’s School of American Ballet will love this book, too. Thanks, BB.

  4. What a great post, Betsy…and your usual fully comprehensive coverage. I am eager to get my hands on this book now!

  5. I think last year’s THE DAY-GLO BROTHERS could also safely be counted as a true life story of collaboration, yes?

    • Elizabeth Bird says

      Good point. I’d initially discounted it since it was two brothers, but they really brought two different sets of skills to come up with Day-Glo. Plus, anytime I can get someone to read that book, I’m happy.

  6. The Wright Brothers, by Russell Freedman.

  7. Aaarrrggghh. Belatedly realizing the request was for picture book format…apologies.

  8. Hi Betsy, Great review of Ballet for Martha. Loved Leda’s book too! And since I am currently working on my 3rd “ true life story of collaboration told in a picture book format,” might I humbly mention that my first in the series, As Good As Anybody: Martin Luther King And Abraham Joshua Heschel’s Amazing March Toward Freedom, (Knopf) was reviewed in your very own hosting home SLJ as “An eloquent tribute to two great men and their surprising alliance.”

    • Elizabeth Bird says

      Good call, Rich! A person gets stuck if they consider collaboration solely in terms of artistic development. Keep ’em coming, folks. We’ll get a useful booklist out of these comments yet!

  9. Appalachian Spring is one of my favorite pieces of music, although I’m familiar with it in its incarnation as an orchestral suite, rather than as a ballet. I can’t wait to see this book.


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